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Strange Encounter

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Oh boy, here we go again.  Another long day over, well, not quite over; I still have to ride the bus home.  I shift my heavy book bag unto my shoulder as I come to the bus stop.  Lord, how I hate the bus.  It’s dirty, loud, smells, the people are rude and worst of all; it takes the bus almost an hour to get home.  I dread this moment every time I have to come to campus.  Hopefully I don’t have to stand and I can at least get a seat.  Sometimes the bus is so crowded that we all have to stand like imbeciles.  You know, even if I do get a seat, it’ll probably be next to some ass.  Dammit all, I hate the bus.

Here it comes, I can see it in the distance, better get suited.  At least it’s not raining today.  A stiff overcast of clouds dim the day, but oh well.  Everyone goes about their loud and obnoxious business as usual.  The bus rolls up; I hoist my book bag up, and hop on.  The bus isn’t too packed; no one is standing, well at least not yet.  I look around, there are no seats available.  Dammit all to Hell, I’ll have to stand, like an idiot, for an hour.  Wait a second, there’s one seat in the back available!

I rush to the back and the two-seater is already filled on the window by a young lady.  She is gazing out the window, oblivious to me coming towards her.  She has jet black hair, almost certainly dyed.  Her hair isn’t too long, goes to her shoulders.  She has black, thick rimmed glasses that frame her pale face.  She has a lip piercing on the left side, nothing major, just a ring.  I get closer, she still doesn’t notice me.  I finally get up to the seat and to my shock, she is quite pregnant.  Just my luck, the one seat available, and for an hour, I have to spend it with a pregnant woman.  As I think about it, this is both good and bad.

“M-may I?” I ask the lady aloud.

“Yeah, go ahead.”  She replies with a faint smile, slowly shifting right, closer to the window.  

I sit down and I try desperately not to touch her.  I mean, I’m not avoiding her like she has the plague; I just…don’t want to intrude on anyone’s personal space, least of all someone as…pretty as her.  I put my heavy book bag on my lap, and open it up.  I reach for my iPod; hopefully it will keep me distracted.  Man, I don’t want to stare at this poor girl and creep her out.  

I can’t help it; I have to take a peek.  I act like I’m fixing my cap and turn in her general direction.  She’s listening to her MP3 player as well.  I quickly slide my gaze over her.  She’s wearing an unbuttoned black overcoat.  Underneath the coat is a black and white horizontal stripped shirt.  Her pregnant belly dominates her lap.  The large sphere is just so round.  I’ve never been this close to someone like her.  Oh boy, time to turn back away.

I go back to my music for a few minutes.  However, my paranoid mind begins to drift to her.  I bet she can read my thoughts.  I bet she knows I like her!  Ohhhh, not cool, she probably thinks I’m some deranged fetish-pervert.  Good Lord, I am sweating…she’s sure to notice.  I mean, yeah, it’s the middle of winter, who sweats on a cold bus?  Me, that’s who; Mr. Dumbass.  But this is madness, she can’t read my thoughts.  I just need to calm down, listen to my music, and I’ll be fine.

Time marches on slowly and curiosity forces me to take another look at her.  She has a small, black purse on her knees.  I notice the keychain on her zipper; it has a cute anime-like frog on it.  She lifts her hands to fix her glasses so I force myself to turn away.  I see her finishing in my peripheral vision.  She shifts up against the window, lifting her legs a bit.  She’s wearing an all-black skirt that appears to end near her knees.  I can’t tell for sure with her sitting down.  What I can tell is she’s wearing all black leggings and wearing little black shoes with a white bow on each.  They’re slip-ons.  I’d imagine it’s hard for her to tie shoe laces in her state.

Man, what I wouldn’t give for her to talk to me, for her to actually be interested in me.  Sometimes I feel like women don’t even see me, and when they do, they assume I’m some sort of freak or oddball.  I guess they’re right, I’m far from normal.  Wait, is she looking at me?  I focus my eyes a bit towards my periphery to check.  She is looking in my general direction, but that doesn’t mean she’s looking at me.  Ugh, best ignore it.  Time passes on a bit, until she shifts again, this time putting her purse on the top of her belly.  As she shifts I feel compelled to give her more room.

“Aw, thanks, but you don’t have to scoot over.”  She says to me out loud.

“Oh um, sorry, wasn’t sure.”  I reply with a faint smile.

“Don’t worry about it.”  She replies with a small, closed mouth smile.  I notice her eyes, a pale brown.  A nice shade, I guess.

Man, I wish I had the courage to talk to her.  I wish I had the courage to at least say a genuine hello, but no, I am a coward.  I lack the will and the decisiveness for such an action.  Besides, she’d probably think I’m a creep.  Oh woe is me.  Woe is the life of someone like me.  The bus nears my stop, time to leave this uncomfortable experience behind.  At least I didn’t make a total fool of myself.

I stand up, pull the cord to signal my stop and put my book bag over my shoulder.  She turns and looks at me, why is she looking at me?  She looks puzzled, almost like she wants to say something, but she doesn’t.  I turn back to her and give a small wave good-bye and march to the front of the bus.  There are two other people following behind me from the seats on the bus.  I pay my toll and hop off.

What a lousy day, what a long day.  I begin slowly walking towards my car.  I stop and fumble for my car keys in my pocket when someone says “Take me with you.”  I turn around and to my surprise; it is the pregnant girl I sat with.  She’s walking towards me.  She has her black overcoat wrapped around her.  It barely closes around her.  She has nice thick legs and stands about a head’s height shorter than me.  

“Uh, sorry, why would you want to come with me?”  I ask as I drop my keys.  I drop my book bag and kneel down to pick them up, she catches up to me and does the same.

“I saw you looking at me.  I’m not stupid.”  She says as she grabs my hand that is holding the keys.  Our eyes lock and I feel strange.  This is just odd.

“Oh?  What do you mean?”  I reply with a mild anxiety in my voice.  To tell you the truth, I’m exceptionally anxious inside, but I’m good at hiding it sometimes.  We both rise up together.

“Where are you off to?”  She replies putting her hands on her hips.

“Uh…I was heading home.”  I reply.

“Where’s home for you?”  She asks.

“Not too far, a few streets away.  A 10 minute ride at best.”  I respond gesturing to my car.

“Awesome, that gives me time to get know you.”  She replies as she walks towards my car.

“Um…”  I moan aloud as she slowly gets in front of me.  I can’t believe this.  Is this really happening?  I rush up to the car and open it.  I come to the side to open the door for her.

“Oh the gentlemanly type?”  She says with a big grin.

“I’d like to hope I am.”  I reply gazing down at her, deep into her pale eyes.

“Well, I’ll just have to test you on that.”  She says as she slowly climbs into my passenger seat.  I get into the car and start it; she puts her purse back on her belly and turns to me and says “Say, what’s your name anyways?”
This is a short I wrote the other day, nothing major. Let me know what you guys think. Point out any spelling or grammar errors, if you can. Thanks, enjoy.
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Wow great story! This is very close to one of my bus rides back in 1986 from Northrop Pico Rivera to Santa Anita Race Track. I had lost my Drivers License for one year from too many DUI's. So i got on this Rosemead Blvd. bus to find my thin self sitting in the last available seat next to a cute petite, but very pregnant looking girl who had no rings on her tinny thin fingers. I did feel very uncomfortable next to this blond beauty, until she farted a sexy not that loud toot, and quickly turned red in her very sweet thin face. The smell was bad enough to turn me green an gag me though. I felt like a wimp then, but she assured me that i am "not the only person to come close to getting sick over her terrible smells"! She started to get off the bus saying she "would walk the 2 miles". I, and most of the near bye nice people told her to sit back down. She did sit down while thanking us. She asked me where i was going, so i told her i was meeting some family at the track where i would bet on the three remaining horse races. So i asked her where she was going that's two miles away? She said she "was going to" her "late Grandmothers old house to take ownership tomorrow". Willed to you i said? She said yes, because her "mother, & father had died 3 years ago in a bad car wreck". I said i am so sorry to hear that. Then i got off at my stop, and soon realize she was following me to the track with her huge under belly expose for all to see. I gave her my wind breaker as it was getting a bit colder from the thick cloud cover. She was surprised by me "being a gentleman plus not upset over" her "following" me. I said, but you can't be old enough to get in? She showed me her ID, and then i realize this was her 21st birthday to which i replied happy birthday. But, but you can't weigh 198#'s even with that awesome round belly. She said no, but she "use to be obese before her parents died". She told me that her "gross fat saved her in that bad crash like bubble rap". She then "lost all" her "fat from not being fed her mothers great cooking plus her depression". She said she "got down to 88#'s then got raped weeks later, & that's why" she's "pregnant at 140#'s" now. So how do you trust me then, i said? She told me she was "a unrapeable fat whale now". I asked her, her name, and i told her mine, then i asked if i could hug or kiss her because she needed to be properly loved as she's so hot. She French kisses me then, we went into the track to find my Moms brother, & sister ( my sweet Aunt then told me she's slowly dying of cancer). Donna was depressed again to hear this bad, bad news, so was i. Donna Masson came home with me that night as my Uncle gave us a ride back to my near Northrop apartment where i got to check out her big bare belly while she stuffed lots of pizza down both our throats as i got so distended that i thought she might be trying to pop me open but i keep eating anyway. When i awoke the next day, most of my smaller things where gone along with her, plus my 3 cats. I never saw Donna again. I am glad i had already removed my two cars batteries for the 1 year time so she didn't steal the cars too, as i had showed her my 1984 Camaro, & 1972 Triumph GT6 too on the great night before. I didn't report her because i figured she wouldn't have left her ID behind if this was her real name, & age. Plus i loved her, & i keep hopping to see her almost naked body again one day. The best part was all the belly kisses we gave each other plus her big outie fitting into my over stretched big innie. I did this belly button thing with my very preggo petite ex-wife some 5 years before this. Oh plus she only got 3 dollars in change from me because i spent all my cash at the track, and on those 3 huge pizzas we somehow ate all up without puking. My belly seemed to look even bigger at work at Northrop that same morning Donna left.  Boy did i get teased/belly poked,  plus no one believed me when i told them about Donna.